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推荐信的模板是不是可以套用

原野一白花骨朵
2016-10-11 17:10
推荐信的称谓问题是否正确?推荐信应该重点突出哪些方面?During the third year of her undergraduate period, she studied under my advice. I was deeply impressed by her independence and creativity. Being the team leader of a National Undergraduate Innovation Program, Miss Zhang has participated in a lot of research work on wine grape along with other students. Her good work has fully manifested her ability to analyze and solve problems, her incorporation of fundamental knowledge with good skills, leadership and her cooperative manner with others. I appreciated her work very much. According to my observation, Miss Zhang has the potential of a promising student.Moreover, she has actively engaged in a variety of practical activities such as college students' summer social practice activity she participated in at the Cofco Great Wall winery (Yantai) Co. Ltd. Because of these activities, she became more passionate toward her study and her aim of study is clearer.Worthy of mention also is her fairly good command of the English language, especially in expressing her own ideas orally and in understanding the literature in her field. She should have no difficulty staying and communicating with people in your country.
  • 卓乐天下
  • 已答2348问题
  • 2016-10-11 19:56

你的文书选段已经收到,老师会尽快修改并回复的。

记得随时查看哦。

等待之余若有其他关于学校,专业或者申请的问题,欢迎在问答社区提问!。

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  • 飞天冬瓜狗
  • 已答2182问题
  • 2016-10-11 20:04

关于推荐信模板的话,你可以看下这个帖子。

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  • 小K
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  • 2016-10-12 12:18

1. Under my advice修改成under my guidance 2. On wine grape修改成on the topic of wine grape, along with other students改成long withher teammates比较好。

Her good work太笼统,可以稍微具化,比如衔接前文说到的作为组长,是如何表现的。

Herleading role for propertask assignment and guidance benefit to her group greatly, during which she hasfully manifested… 3. Potential of a promising student语法错误,改成Potential ofbeing a promising student4. such as college students' summer social practice activity sheparticipated in at the Cofco Great Wall winery (Yantai) Co. Ltd.语义重复和表达不准确,改成suchas summer social practice of college students held/sponsored by the Cofco GreatWall winery (Yantai) Co. Ltd.5. Worthy of mention also改成Also worthy of mention is6. Good command of the English language改成Good command ofEnglish7. She should have no difficulty staying and communicating with peoplein your country. 语法错误,改成She should have no difficulty in staying and communicating withpeople in your country.。

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